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''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | ''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | ||
:Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--[[User:RiverAura|RiverAura]] 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | :Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--[[User:RiverAura|RiverAura]] 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | ||
" Of cause my talk of attachment refers to young beings" | |||
Shouldn't it be " of course" ? | |||
Revision as of 14:25, 29 May 2011
what he and his gang were doing as they rebelled should become what he and his gang were seeking as they rebelled, my bad ... 05308 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--RiverAura 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
" Of cause my talk of attachment refers to young beings"
Shouldn't it be " of course" ?
