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== Just a little word choice thing I noticed == | == Just a little word choice thing I noticed == | ||
In the last section, you write "The lack of changes will be applauded by those who prefer a purely original experience, while lauded by others who were hoping for a new, fresh take on an old game." I do not think "lauded" was quite the term you were going for there; "lauded" means praised or | In the last section, you write, "The lack of changes will be applauded by those who prefer a purely original experience, while lauded by others who were hoping for a new, fresh take on an old game." I do not think "lauded" was quite the term you were going for there; "lauded" means praised or acclaimed, while I think you were going for something more along the lines of disparaged or criticized. Again, it's pretty minor, but I just thought you might want to edit that word to better reflect what you meant. --[[User:RiverAura|RiverAura]] ([[User talk:RiverAura|talk]]) 04:07, 9 March 2015 (UTC) | ||
== missing period == | |||
The sentence "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!)" doesn't end in a period. It should be like this: "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!). I am a rare sight on Bulbanews, but that's because I'm not much of a writer. However, I do h..." [[User:Pandakekok|Pandakekok]] ([[User talk:Pandakekok|talk]]) 04:59, 2 August 2019 (UTC) |
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