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:::Added. [[User:G50|<span style="color:red">''ㄱ''</span>]][[User talk:G50|<span style="color:green">''쉰''</span>]] G50 09:47, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
:::Added. [[User:G50|<span style="color:red">''ㄱ''</span>]][[User talk:G50|<span style="color:green">''쉰''</span>]] G50 09:47, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
::::Thank you very much for your help.  :)  --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 16:55, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
::::Thank you very much for your help.  :)  --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 16:55, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
== Sentence error ==
You made a grammatical error in [[Japan Cup 2014 to be held from May 2-5|this]] article. The error is:
<br>"...with Mewtwo, Yveltal, Xerneas, Zygarde, and Pokémon that were Poké Transported from the Pokémon Black and White and Pokémon Black 2 and White 2 games are ineligible and cannot be used in the tournament."
<br>Read it aloud and you'll see what's wrong. I think this phrase was a standalone sentence at first, but then you joined it to the previous sentence with "with". When you did that, however, you failed to change the sentence to keep it grammatically correct. If I had permission, I'd fix it myself. But I don't. [[User:Neal Cruco|Neal Cruco]] ([[User talk:Neal Cruco|talk]]) 21:04, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
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