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	In the last section, you write "The lack of changes will be applauded by those who prefer a purely original experience, while lauded by others who were hoping for a new, fresh take on an old game." I do not think "lauded" was quite the term you were going for there; "lauded" means praised or ~~acclaim~~, while I think you were going for something more along the lines of disparaged or criticized. Again, it's pretty minor, but I just thought you might want to edit that word to better reflect what you meant. --[[User:RiverAura\|RiverAura]] ([[User talk:RiverAura\|talk]]) 04:07, 9 March 2015 (UTC)		In the last section, you write, "The lack of changes will be applauded by those who prefer a purely original experience, while lauded by others who were hoping for a new, fresh take on an old game." I do not think "lauded" was quite the term you were going for there; "lauded" means praised or acclaimed, while I think you were going for something more along the lines of disparaged or criticized. Again, it's pretty minor, but I just thought you might want to edit that word to better reflect what you meant. --[[User:RiverAura\|RiverAura]] ([[User talk:RiverAura\|talk]]) 04:07, 9 March 2015 (UTC)