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 Actually I saw that no one reported it before i did, and messily? That's your opinion, it wasn't messily written. [[User:Playerking95|Playerking95]] 06:44, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
+:You filled out the new article form messily. The article itself wasn't too bad, but the rest of it...
+<pre>{{Article|
+type=news |
+picture=http://pokebeach.com/news/0211/victini-and-the-light-hero-reshiram.jpg | [shouldn't be hotlinking to PokéBeach]
+caption=Reshiram to also get a movie on the 16th of July, 2011. |
+weekday=Saturday |
+day=12 |
+month=2 |
+year=2011 |
+time=05:02:42 |
+discusstype=bmgf | [this should initially be left blank, and should only be used to link to Bulbagarden (hence the "bmgf")]
+discusslink=http://detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.jp/qa/question_detail/q1055469655 | [again, this should usually be left blank]
+sourcetype=bulbanews |
+sourcename= | [you didn't put your own name]
+sourcelink= |
+tagline=The Deep Black Pokemon, Zekrom and the Vast White Pokemon Reshiram, will get their own movie for Movie 14 |
+blurb=Version exclusives, Reshiram and Zekrom, to get their own Pokemon movie for Best Wishes Movie 1. }} [not proper grammar]
+{{CategorizeIn|Anime|2|11}}
+The two version different Pokemon.... [cut off so it doesn't stretch my screen; this part was mostly okay]
+</pre>
+:Hopefully you can see my criticisms in the text above. Note also for the title that numbers should be spelled out and only the first word and proper nouns get capital letters. You may want to read over the {{bn|manual of style}} and {{bn|article submission}} guide.
+:Additionally, I was already writing my own report when I found yours; I deleted the misspelled title first and left the other one until afterward. Sorry for any inconvenience and better luck with your future submissions. &mdash;'''<span style="font-family:Verdana">[[bp:User talk:The dark lord trombonator|<span style="color:#000">darklord</span>]][[User talk:The dark lord trombonator|<span style="color:#0047AB">trom</span>]]</span>''' 07:04, 12 February 2011 (UTC)