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Revision as of 23:22, 28 May 2011 (view source) The dark lord trombonator (talk \| contribs) m (moved Draft talk:Personality & Development: Ash's Squirtle to Talk:Personality & Development: Ash's Squirtle: out of the draft zone, go!) ← Older edit		Revision as of 13:23, 29 May 2011 (view source) RiverAura (talk \| contribs) No edit summary Newer edit →
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	''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308\|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)		''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308\|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
			:Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--[[User:RiverAura\|RiverAura]] 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC)