Wording choices
- Can we use 'multitude' next time? I like that word; I think it's pretty. 'Abundance' is also quite nice. We could also explicitly state a number.
- Is it really worth changing the blurb to remove the word 'and'? It spams so many things.
- If the word 'revealed' is in the title, then don't put it in the tagline. Avoid repetition, especially in these key areas.