Some of this is a bit awkward to read:
"A day of release update" Can we get some hyphens, please? Putting up with Bulbapedia's "Black and White related server stress" notice is nasty enough.
"The update comes with a 3D also video." is presumably "The update also comes with a 3D video."
"Firmware update version 1.1.0-1 is to help with wireless communication, system stability and improve the SpotPass function." Swap the comma for an 'and', extra comma before existing 'and'?
Incidentally, I've just noticed that the 'Editing Help' link I'm offered whilst placing this edit has been dead since 2008.
Colintron 10:21, 27 March 2011 (UTC)