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::I do know what "verbatem" means. It means stating what you've read word for word. Meaning you just copy your source without making any differences. Exact words, in other words.
::I do know what "verbatem" means. It means stating what you've read word for word. Meaning you just copy your source without making any differences. Exact words, in other words.
::Also, as to how it pertains to Pokémon, the bill proposition that was recently passed sees to eliminate pretty much all animes, mangas, and games in tokyo for anything that might be a virtual depiction of criminality or pornographic. The fact that the article in question, actually, [http://www.gameinformer.com/blogs/members/b/sakabato24_blog/archive/2010/12/14/is-it-the-end-of-anime-and-manga-bill-156-passed.aspx two articles], would mention that most likely all animes will be banned would mean automatically that Pokémon itself will be banned as well. You can't say "all" with anime if you are going to exempt one or two of them. [[User:Weedle Mchairybug|Weedle Mchairybug]] 02:49, 19 December 2010 (UTC)
::Also, as to how it pertains to Pokémon, the bill proposition that was recently passed sees to eliminate pretty much all animes, mangas, and games in tokyo for anything that might be a virtual depiction of criminality or pornographic. The fact that the article in question, actually, [http://www.gameinformer.com/blogs/members/b/sakabato24_blog/archive/2010/12/14/is-it-the-end-of-anime-and-manga-bill-156-passed.aspx two articles], would mention that most likely all animes will be banned would mean automatically that Pokémon itself will be banned as well. You can't say "all" with anime if you are going to exempt one or two of them. [[User:Weedle Mchairybug|Weedle Mchairybug]] 02:49, 19 December 2010 (UTC)
Reason why I chose not to delete this ''yet'': It may affect the franchise someway, somehow in the future for all we know.
Problems with the article:
#Terms: You need to explain them. For instance, what's the "DPJ"? There are too many terms most people would not know. Tell them to look them up? Bad answer.
#Pokémon: You really need to state how it affects the franchise. People might think it would not affect the franchise since it's not exclusive to Tokyo or something. The article talks about a lot of other things, but Pokémon was not really stated.
I don't really get if the article's a copy or not, but making your own article about a more complicated article is always better here. You have until the 23rd before the article will be deleted (unless someone decides to delete it beforehand). <span style="font-family:Cracked; font-size:125%"><sup>[[bp:User:Tc26/Anime Predictions|<span style="color:#525252;">tc</span>]]</sup>[[:User:Tc26|<span style="color:#DAA520;">²₆</span>]][[:User talk:Tc26|<span style="color:#DAA520;">tc</span>]]<sub>[[bp:User:Tc26/Sandbox|<span style="color:#525252;">26</span>]]</sub></span> 03:09, 19 December 2010 (UTC)
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