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''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | ''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | ||
:Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--[[User:RiverAura|RiverAura]] 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | :Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--[[User:RiverAura|RiverAura]] 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | ||
" Of cause my talk of attachment refers to young beings" | |||
Shouldn't it be " of course" ? --[[User:Spongeenthusiast|Spongeenthusiast]] 14:28, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I am not sure about viscous cycle but I fixed the remaining typos. <span style="color:#00FF00">♫♪</span>[[User:Adyniz|<span style="color:#6699FF;">'''Ady'''</span>]][[User talk:Adyniz|<span style="color:#99CCFF;">'''Niz'''</span>]]<span style="color:#00FF00">♪♫</span> 16:37, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Second sentence needs a caipital T. [[User:Focus58|Focus58]] 17:22, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
This is closer to stylistic choice than typo but that, last, sentence, needs, something. [[User:Colintron|Colintron]] 23:27, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | |||