what he and his gang were doing as they rebelled should become what he and his gang were seeking as they rebelled, my bad ... 05308 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--RiverAura 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
" Of cause my talk of attachment refers to young beings"
Shouldn't it be " of course" ?