what he and his gang were doing as they rebelled should become what he and his gang were seeking as they rebelled, my bad ... 05308 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--RiverAura 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
" Of cause my talk of attachment refers to young beings"
Shouldn't it be " of course" ? --Spongeenthusiast 14:28, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- I am not sure about viscous cycle but I fixed the remaining typos. ♫♪AdyNiz♪♫ 16:37, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Second sentence needs a caipital T. Focus58 17:22, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
This is closer to stylistic choice than typo but that, last, sentence, needs, something. Colintron 23:27, 29 May 2011 (UTC)