Talk:Personality & Development: Ash's Squirtle: Difference between revisions

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''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
''what he and his gang were '''doing''' as they rebelled '' should become ''what he and his gang were '''seeking''' as they rebelled'', my bad ... [[User:05308|05308]] 22:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
:Also, I think "viscous cycle" should probably be replaced with "vicious cycle".--[[User:RiverAura|RiverAura]] 13:23, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
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