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Hey, G50. I wanted to know if you would be alright if I merge some of the contents of the draft I made with the official article. --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 08:14, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | Hey, G50. I wanted to know if you would be alright if I merge some of the contents of the draft I made with the official article. --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 08:14, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | ||
:Sure, it can't be edited by regular users so let me know on this Talk Page what you would like to add and I will add it in. Good job with the draft by the way, it was written well. [[User:G50|<span style="color:red">''ㄱ''</span>]][[User talk:G50|<span style="color:green">''쉰''</span>]] G50 08:25, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | :Sure, it can't be edited by regular users so let me know on this Talk Page what you would like to add and I will add it in. Good job with the draft by the way, it was written well. [[User:G50|<span style="color:red">''ㄱ''</span>]][[User talk:G50|<span style="color:green">''쉰''</span>]] G50 08:25, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | ||
::Thank you for the complement, I just tried the best that I could do. As for the suggestions, I have looked a bit closer and noticed that the majority of what I wrote has already been neatly summed up in the present article, so I will admit I only have a few. The first suggestion is a sentence about the initial release and subsequent postponement in Japan, Korea, and the remaining Asian countries as an added detail for the reader. The second is just [https://twitter.com/NintendoAmerica/statuses/415959724043956224 three] [http://en-americas-support.nintendo.com/app/answers/detail/a_id/2393/p/430 possible] [http://www.nintendo.co.jp/support/information/2013/1226.html sources] that could be added, especially the latter two. The final suggestion is just a comma after Poké Transporter in the first sentence. Thanks again, [[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 09:36, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | |||