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(Says Nintendo 3DS family 'games' , and eligible games instead of Nintendo 3DS family handhelds, and eligible games.) |
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From March 1 until March 31, players may register the Nintendo 3DS family '''games''', and eligible games | ==Announcement error== | ||
''From March 1 until March 31, players may register the Nintendo 3DS family '''games''', and eligible games'' | |||
That should say Nintendo 3DS Family Consoles or Handhelds or Handheld Consoles. | That should say Nintendo 3DS Family Consoles or Handhelds or Handheld Consoles. {{unsigned|Yamitora1}} | ||
==Grammar== | |||
''From March 1-31, players in North America may register a Nintendo 3DS family system and any eligible game to obtain a free download code for {{bp|Pokémon X and Y|Pokémon X or Pokémon Y}}. The systems that may be registered are the {{bp|Nintendo 3DS}}, {{bp|Nintendo 3DS XL}}, and the {{bp|Nintendo 2DS}}.'' | |||
The article is fraught with errors and should be edited. This is my proofreading of the first paragraph of the article. --<font face="Segoe UI"><span style="text-shadow:grey 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em">[[User:IWannaBeTheVeryBest|<font color="red">The</font>]]Very[[User talk:IWannaBeTheVeryBest|<font color="white">Best</font>]]</span></font> 06:58, 26 February 2014 (UTC) |
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