Talk:Secrets about the Machop evolution family officially revealed

The writer may want to recheck some of their phrasing — the word "despite" means "in spite of" or "although," not "for example" or "such as" the way the writer uses it in the third paragraph. And what is this sentence even supposed to mean?: Plus, while some trainers can't tell the difference between males and females, they might take a closer look at the gender difference. Its tone is in such extreme marketing-mode that it actively prevents the reader from understanding — Machop and its family flat-out don't have gender differences in the games. Pumpkinking0192 (talk) 16:36, 7 December 2015 (UTC)